Nothing particularly special about this track aside from the fact you used quite a number of Ralph Cowell's melodies. The lows are extremely muddy, I can barely hear the kick, the sound is clipping, and it's just an over all random track.
Instead of working with more than 1 of Ralph's melodies, try using only one. Work with it, make variations to the melody, and make the bass harmonize with everything else. And also read up on audio engineering, since that might help you better understand sounds and how clipping and a BUNCH of different stuff works.